Lara

Posted on June 24, 2012 by Deleted User
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6 Responses to Lara

  1. oscar says:
    June 26, 2012 at 2:02 pm

    I loved it sam funny clear punctiwason.Keep riting oon the blog.

  2. Maddie says:
    June 26, 2012 at 2:03 pm

    I love your piece of writing. I really got into it, also it was very descriptive!

  3. mia 1 says:
    June 26, 2012 at 2:07 pm

    Fantastic sentenis and good punshion and you stade on the Topic.

  4. ETHAN says:
    June 26, 2012 at 2:09 pm

    Very Very good i think you could make a brill storty out of this and i love all the adjectives and deateal

  5. Mrs Hedley says:
    June 28, 2012 at 2:18 pm

    I like how you started your sentences in different ways.

  6. Abi says:
    July 9, 2012 at 4:37 pm

    Great Lara I would like A dog to!!

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