Elena, this is a great piece of writing and although I’ve never riden a horse, you’re writing helped me to imagine what it must be like. You have used some super vocabulary throughout and have written in clear sentences.
Next time, remember each time you use “I” it should be a capital letter.
Well done once again and I hope you keep entering the 100 Word Challenge.
Mrs Stones http://bradfordschools.net/blog/miriamlord100wc/
Elena, this is a great piece of writing and although I’ve never riden a horse, you’re writing helped me to imagine what it must be like. You have used some super vocabulary throughout and have written in clear sentences.
Next time, remember each time you use “I” it should be a capital letter.
Well done once again and I hope you keep entering the 100 Word Challenge.
Mrs Stones
http://bradfordschools.net/blog/miriamlord100wc/