Hi Alex! I love the way you left you story at a cliff hanger. I also really liked the first sentence, and it made you want read more. Maybe you could describe the T.Rex in a bit more detail. Did you know, that chickens are distantly related the T.Rex!
Hi Alex! I love the way you left you story at a cliff hanger. I also really liked the first sentence, and it made you want read more. Maybe you could describe the T.Rex in a bit more detail. Did you know, that chickens are distantly related the T.Rex!