Very good Yenji,
I really like what you put together. Very creative.
Although there was one sentence which I didn’t really understand, On the first sentence I didn’t really get the phrase “Yesterday I saw a golden sun raged across the dark galaxy”
Is the use of rage a word explaining how the sun is moving acreoss the galaxy?
Or is the sun just raging in anger?
Very good Yenji,
I really like what you put together. Very creative.
Although there was one sentence which I didn’t really understand, On the first sentence I didn’t really get the phrase “Yesterday I saw a golden sun raged across the dark galaxy”
Is the use of rage a word explaining how the sun is moving acreoss the galaxy?
Or is the sun just raging in anger?
-Jamie