Your poem is great.I really like the rhyming words ‘crazy’ and ‘lazy’,However I am shore you were supposed to put a comma after’I love them all the same’.
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Gabriel Y4
Mia that is really lovely for your dogs that is really nice.
I really like your full stops and capital letters you remebered them well done.
For an idea maby you could tell the world which dog was crazy and which dog was lazy
Hi Mia,
Your poem is great.I really like the rhyming words ‘crazy’ and ‘lazy’,However I am shore you were supposed to put a comma after’I love them all the same’.
Apart from that it’s a great poem,check out our blogging site at Crowland Primary School Blog.
Gabriel Y4
Mia that is really lovely for your dogs that is really nice.
I really like your full stops and capital letters you remebered them well done.
For an idea maby you could tell the world which dog was crazy and which dog was lazy
Mia you have made your poem amazing well done for using
rhyming words but instead of full stops at the end of the line
use a comma instead.