Hi Anna,
Welcomes from kent,
Great piece of work here. Completly fabulous. The dangerous cheek. Amazing description. I love everything about it. The phrases ‘hysterical fits echoing’, ‘heat is prickling on my cheeks’ and ‘fizz of the flames ‘ I like especialy because of there clarity and danger. Keep on blogging. Oh, by the way. Proof read your capital i’s. It was probalbly a mistake but you used a lower case one. Well done.
Hi Anna,
Your work is sensational and It really makes a picture in my mind, I love your description such as ‘hysterical fits echoing’, but when I read it through there were a couple of changes in tense. It went from past tense to present , to past and back to present. Otherwise it was an amazing description.
Hi Anna,
Welcomes from kent,
Great piece of work here. Completly fabulous. The dangerous cheek. Amazing description. I love everything about it. The phrases ‘hysterical fits echoing’, ‘heat is prickling on my cheeks’ and ‘fizz of the flames ‘ I like especialy because of there clarity and danger. Keep on blogging. Oh, by the way. Proof read your capital i’s. It was probalbly a mistake but you used a lower case one. Well done.
Hi Anna,
Your work is sensational and It really makes a picture in my mind, I love your description such as ‘hysterical fits echoing’, but when I read it through there were a couple of changes in tense. It went from past tense to present , to past and back to present. Otherwise it was an amazing description.