Hi Niyusha,
Here is what I liked about this blog:
1. You gave some great reasons about why school is important.
2. You also gave evidence to back up your reasons.
You might want to improve on these:
1. Check your spelling.
2. Some parts of your blog didn’t make much sense, so also edit and improve.
Apart from that, everything was great so keep up the good work and carry on blogging! 🙂
Hi Niyusha,
Here is what I liked about this blog:
1. You gave some great reasons about why school is important.
2. You also gave evidence to back up your reasons.
You might want to improve on these:
1. Check your spelling.
2. Some parts of your blog didn’t make much sense, so also edit and improve.
Apart from that, everything was great so keep up the good work and carry on blogging! 🙂