The interruption

This entry was posted in 5 Fleming. Bookmark the permalink.

5 Responses to The interruption

  1. Joseph says:

    Hi,
    I think your poem was great but maybe next time you could check your work because there was a spelling mistake.
    Otherwise it was good.

  2. Rafi says:

    Hi Anna,
    I thought your poem was great as it showed all of the priorities a poem should have. You included some fabulous adjectives and I could see all of the time and effort put into this. Keep up the good work and maybe one day you will be a brilliant poet like Mr liles.

  3. Alex C says:

    Hi,
    I thought that your poem was really good but maybe you should check the word”goog” but otherwise it was great

  4. liam says:

    hi anna i thought that your poem was really good but like Alex said maybe you could change the word ” good ” to good but other wise well done

  5. liam says:

    sorry i mean you could change the word “goog ” to good.but other wise well done

Comments are closed.