This is a well worded piece of writing, Imogen. Even in wealthier countries, there are some schools with very good reputations and results but not all can afford to attend because of the high school fees. What we do have is a good education system available to all. Even a basic education for children in poorer countries would help them to improve their futures.
I hope you keep entering the 100WC.
This is a lovely well-written piece. I particularly like the last part where you say school enriches you as a human being. I agree! School is so much more than just the lessons. You can make new friends, learn to communicate well and become more confident and independent. It is such a shame that not everyone in the world has the same opportunities.
Well done for this great 100WC!
Hello Imogen,
This is a well worded piece of writing, Imogen. Even in wealthier countries, there are some schools with very good reputations and results but not all can afford to attend because of the high school fees. What we do have is a good education system available to all. Even a basic education for children in poorer countries would help them to improve their futures.
I hope you keep entering the 100WC.
@RossMannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher, NSW, Australia
Hi Imogen,
This is a lovely well-written piece. I particularly like the last part where you say school enriches you as a human being. I agree! School is so much more than just the lessons. You can make new friends, learn to communicate well and become more confident and independent. It is such a shame that not everyone in the world has the same opportunities.
Well done for this great 100WC!