Alex S, I liked the way you had a bit that was repeated in your poem. And the title that gave the thought the toast had some sort of gold spread on it and it was extremely important. Anna W
Alex, It’s really funny that your dog stole your toast. Did he? Also i love the way you set out the important story telling bits in bigger letters
James Horrocks,
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Alex S,
I liked the way you had a bit that was repeated in your poem. And the title that gave the thought the toast had some sort of gold spread on it and it was extremely important.
Anna W
Alex,
It’s really funny that your dog stole your toast.
Did he?
Also i love the way you set out the important story telling bits in bigger letters
James Horrocks,