Dear Anna, I really liked the pace and atmosphere in your poem. It made me feel as if I was watching the lion catch his prey. In particular I liked the description ‘ sinking his teeth into fur and flesh.’ Good job! Anna W
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Dear Anna,
I really liked the pace and atmosphere in your poem. It made me feel as if I was watching the lion catch his prey. In particular I liked the description ‘ sinking his teeth into fur and flesh.’ Good job!
Anna W