Hi Freya, well done for completing the 100 wc. You have written a good argument and make clear points on why school is important. I like how you have used rhetorical questions in your writing, it is a really effective way of writing. Keep up the great writing, I look forward to reading more.
Hi Freya, well done for completing the 100 wc. You have written a good argument and make clear points on why school is important. I like how you have used rhetorical questions in your writing, it is a really effective way of writing. Keep up the great writing, I look forward to reading more.