I really liked it how you set it out I thought it was amazing but the only mistake you did were the apostrophies like instead of thats it is that’s but otherwise well done.
There are a lot bold words, but that is good because it gives a feel to the story and tells you the basic bits that are most important .
Also very good punctuation wise!
well done Jake! I really really like how you described silva scoring. And how you said victory , once more.Next time work on your apostrophies. Overall,I loved it.
I really liked it how you set it out I thought it was amazing but the only mistake you did were the apostrophies like instead of thats it is that’s but otherwise well done.
There are a lot bold words, but that is good because it gives a feel to the story and tells you the basic bits that are most important .
Also very good punctuation wise!
Jamie Horrocks
Thank you Jamie and Alex
well done Jake! I really really like how you described silva scoring. And how you said victory , once more.Next time work on your apostrophies. Overall,I loved it.