Very exciting description, grabbing readers attention and great reality related words. Awesome.
strange ice cream you got there! I wonder how you ended up getting thors ice cream? Good vocabulary!
Raifi this is one spectactaculur story you have used some level 5 vocabulary. This is what I call a final 100 word challenge!. http://bradfordschools.net/blog/miriamlord/
Well Done Rafi I like your 100 word challenge because you have used lots of ambitious vocabulary well done once again. http://bradfordschools.net/blog/miriamlord100wc/
this makes me feel hungry because it is described really well.
i like the way you used alot of descriptive words it made the story sound even better
i like it but it is very strange ice cream . it had great describing word about the ice cream
Strang ice cream but lovely icecream!!! really liked the story and the detail.
I am now craving ice cream!
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Very exciting description, grabbing readers attention and great reality related words. Awesome.
strange ice cream you got there! I wonder how you ended up getting thors ice cream? Good vocabulary!
Raifi this is one spectactaculur story you have used some level 5 vocabulary. This is what I call a final 100 word challenge!.
http://bradfordschools.net/blog/miriamlord/
Well Done Rafi I like your 100 word challenge because you have used lots of ambitious vocabulary well done once again.
http://bradfordschools.net/blog/miriamlord100wc/
this makes me feel hungry because it is described really well.
i like the way you used alot of descriptive words it made the story sound even better
i like it but it is very strange ice cream .
it had great describing word about the ice cream
Strang ice cream but lovely icecream!!!
really liked the story and the detail.
I am now craving ice cream!