Hi Lulu,
Great peice of work here. I thought people had stopped writing history pages so it is nice that you have brought it back. You have used vivid descriptions and great dates. Such as 1536, what a great year. My one thing to improve would be explain who the Henry is. I know that you mean Henry VIII but you must think of your audience. Do they know who you mean? What made you write about this perticular era? Keep up the good work.
Hi Lulu,
Great peice of work here. I thought people had stopped writing history pages so it is nice that you have brought it back. You have used vivid descriptions and great dates. Such as 1536, what a great year. My one thing to improve would be explain who the Henry is. I know that you mean Henry VIII but you must think of your audience. Do they know who you mean? What made you write about this perticular era? Keep up the good work.
Grace