Swimming with fish

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11 Responses to Swimming with fish

  1. Alex Fortes says:

    very nice rhyming poem but need full stops

  2. Ms Ashraf says:

    Alex- I think you also may need to consider using full stops and capital letters in your comment.
    Do you think that poems need full stops?

  3. Sam C says:

    I think it’s very funny and clever and I especialy like the cod fish part.

  4. BenL says:

    Brillant i love it very funny it is so good!!! I can`t think of eney thing wrong!!!!

  5. Hermione says:

    funny your very talented from hermione

  6. Lola says:

    I find it is a funny and great I find luren you have done a great job!

  7. Luke says:

    Great poem lauren and I love your imagination.

  8. Alex B says:

    This is really cool! The rhyming is exellent and the lines of the poem are really funny. Keep it up!

  9. Gabriella says:

    Hi Lauren
    Wow! What an amazing poem! It is very creative.
    I like the way you have mixed humans with fish!

  10. joshua says:

    Good, funny and interesting .

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