to my surprise

4 Responses to to my surprise

1. Madison says:

   October 1, 2012 at 10:34 am

   Hi,james that was realy exciting are you going to write a part two ? mayby next time you could put some more description.
2. Ben P says:

   October 1, 2012 at 10:36 am

   Hi James
   I like your descripteve languge but what does S.W.A.T mean? Is this a 100wc? If it is I can’t see we were just stting down for dinner when. Lastly why is there a random r at the bottom of the page?
   From Ben P
3. Rosie says:

   October 1, 2012 at 5:59 pm

   Hi James
   I realy enjoyed reading your peice of work, because it is exiting and intresting.What does S.W.A.T stand for? Next time you could describe the helicoptor.
   from Rosie
4. Ella M says:

   October 3, 2012 at 4:17 pm

   Hi James your writing was really good and you even used an onomatopoeia like BANG.
   I had to look up what S.W.A.T means.
   From Ella M

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