Wow Gabriella you described nature amazingly with every discription hanging out there. Your descriptions were briliant! You described every word and every movement like like profesinals do. In just that one piece of writing you made me want to read more. My advice is that you make that piece of writing into an adventure book. Well done Gabriella, when yoe are older you could become a fantastic author,and don’t think that I am just saying that.
Hi Gabby
I love this piece of writing its magical it starts of with a lovely description of the forest at its best an all the animals resting in the night time and it was backed up by lovely adjectives about the sunset,then it turned into a lion rampage well done gabby you have the talent of an author keep up the good work and litriture
Thanks Mxx
Wow Gabriella you described nature amazingly with every discription hanging out there. Your descriptions were briliant! You described every word and every movement like like profesinals do. In just that one piece of writing you made me want to read more. My advice is that you make that piece of writing into an adventure book. Well done Gabriella, when yoe are older you could become a fantastic author,and don’t think that I am just saying that.
Amazing way to describe nature ,
your writing gave me a great picture of what of what the forest looks like and great title.
Hi Gabby
I love this piece of writing its magical it starts of with a lovely description of the forest at its best an all the animals resting in the night time and it was backed up by lovely adjectives about the sunset,then it turned into a lion rampage well done gabby you have the talent of an author keep up the good work and litriture
Thanks Mxx