Hi Hermione,
I liked your story. I particularly liked that you made Big Junk shy rather than fierce and aggressive.
Remember to read back over your work and put your full stops in the right place!
Keep up the good work!
Well done Hermione. It was as if your story came to life. Plus I love the slang to it, after I read that I could visulise a picture in my head. Brilliant work!
Hi Hermione,
I liked your story. I particularly liked that you made Big Junk shy rather than fierce and aggressive.
Remember to read back over your work and put your full stops in the right place!
Keep up the good work!
Well done Hermione. It was as if your story came to life. Plus I love the slang to it, after I read that I could visulise a picture in my head. Brilliant work!