I love this! You chose a totally different way to tackle the writing than any others I have read. I thought that was very clever and made yours stand out from the others. Well done on a great idea!
Wow, I love this 100WC. I really like how you didn’t tell the reader who you were. I especially like the line ’tissue-paper trees to big swirly things’- it really adds to my imagination of what you are writing about! Remember to make sure you use capital letters at the start of a sentence- can you spot where you forgot to use one?
I love this! You chose a totally different way to tackle the writing than any others I have read. I thought that was very clever and made yours stand out from the others. Well done on a great idea!
Hi Ben.
Wow, I love this 100WC. I really like how you didn’t tell the reader who you were. I especially like the line ’tissue-paper trees to big swirly things’- it really adds to my imagination of what you are writing about! Remember to make sure you use capital letters at the start of a sentence- can you spot where you forgot to use one?
Well done Ben, this is brilliant.