Very creative I could hear that my voice turned into a spook when reading it. I like how you didn’t do walk for the metal squrriel you did rampage and was very descriptive. I thought of mashing potatoes when the squrriel was in Tokyo. Loved reading all of it. Next time your title at the top, most people would maybe put squrriel as a capital for a title. I wished you weren’t ment to do 100 words because I would loved hearing more.
That is work that you should seriously be proud of. Partly because of your descriptions.
Very creative I could hear that my voice turned into a spook when reading it. I like how you didn’t do walk for the metal squrriel you did rampage and was very descriptive. I thought of mashing potatoes when the squrriel was in Tokyo. Loved reading all of it. Next time your title at the top, most people would maybe put squrriel as a capital for a title. I wished you weren’t ment to do 100 words because I would loved hearing more.