Amazing! Your 100 word challenge was amazing and I like you have used a great adjective’ corrupt’. Also I like how you have used suspense at the end by using ‘ until world war 4 started’. Next time, you could use some similies for
example ‘ the gun shots were as loud as a Elephant stomping away’.
Amazing! Your 100 word challenge was amazing and I like you have used a great adjective’ corrupt’. Also I like how you have used suspense at the end by using ‘ until world war 4 started’. Next time, you could use some similies for
example ‘ the gun shots were as loud as a Elephant stomping away’.
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Gosh Alexander, what a scary and powerful piece of writing.
Excellent use of the prompt words. Well done!