Hi Nathalie,
I loved that piece of writing! You were very expressive through your
writing and you used some excellent rhyming words. I really look
forwards to reading your next piece of work!
Well done Nathalie I loved the rhyming words. It really makes the poem sound extraordinary when read out loud!! The theme really worked with the poem. And excatly 100 words. your a superstar.
Hi Nathalie,
I loved that piece of writing! You were very expressive through your
writing and you used some excellent rhyming words. I really look
forwards to reading your next piece of work!
wow!!!
that was a great peace of work,
I loved the rhyming words describing the weather,
THAT WAS GREAT.
I think your piece of writing was amazing!I love the adjectives that you used to desribe the snow.
The only improvement is that the end of the poem needs to have a full stop.
Thank you Hugo. That improvement really made me think.
Well done Nathalie I loved the rhyming words. It really makes the poem sound extraordinary when read out loud!! The theme really worked with the poem. And excatly 100 words. your a superstar.
From your Brother Gabriel.