Hello Thomas, I really enjoyed reading your 100 word challenge! This is a very imaginative piece of writing and you left me in so much suspense at the end! I like that you have used some interesting adverbs and adjectives to add detail to your story. I like that you didn’t make it obvious that it was a yeti until the end! Can’t wait to read more of your stories. 🙂
Hello Thomas, I really enjoyed reading your 100 word challenge! This is a very imaginative piece of writing and you left me in so much suspense at the end! I like that you have used some interesting adverbs and adjectives to add detail to your story. I like that you didn’t make it obvious that it was a yeti until the end! Can’t wait to read more of your stories. 🙂
I too love your use of adjectives, it creates a clear picture in my mind, and sense of atmosphere about the place. Well done Thomas!