Emerald City

Posted on October 15, 2012 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to Emerald City

  1. Alex B says:
    October 15, 2012 at 9:16 am

    This is great, Luke! Your descriptions are fantastic, and the ending is really good. Next time try to include more punctuation.

  2. Sam G says:
    October 18, 2012 at 3:56 pm

    Great punctuation, love how you used awkward silence well done!.

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