Hey Eusebi,
Nice description and well done!
I like how you have used some of the senses.
Although my only dispute is how you used green a couple of times in a row.
Hi Euesebi, that was realy amazing I liked the way you described even the litlest of things it sounded great maybe next time you could describe whats around you
I really like how wrote studded with emaeralds and you wrote dazzling sight that could blind you.
But maybe you could of described the green more. looking forward to reading your next post.
HI Eusebi,
I really like your similes and description also when you read you feel like your there because of the description.
Hi Eusebi,
What a fantastic description, you used some great similes and you could feel the atmosphere of the Emerald city.
Hi Euesebi,
good work I like the the word when you thought of slurps its a great word.
Well done.
Hi Eusebi
I like your personification in your writing very much.
Hey Eusebi,
Nice description and well done!
I like how you have used some of the senses.
Although my only dispute is how you used green a couple of times in a row.
Hi Eusebi,
I really like your work and that you used 4 senses, touch, smell, sight, hear to create the atmoshere, you could also have done something about taste.
Julius
Hi Euesebi, that was realy amazing I liked the way you described even the litlest of things it sounded great maybe next time you could describe whats around you
Hi Eusebi
I really like how wrote studded with emaeralds and you wrote dazzling sight that could blind you.
But maybe you could of described the green more. looking forward to reading your next post.