Bloggers are the social-commentators of our day.
The Dickens’ of the 21st Century,
But with this power and influence
Must come a real sense
Of integrity and responsibility about what they say
How do you think that bloggers should exercise this?
I realy liked the way you spelt the sentence in a line. you werent out of the 100 word challenge by alot you got 101 which is also very good but when you write the sentence down in a line you forgot to add a T.
Hello Raphael,
this is a truly artistic text, congratulations!
You could add emphasis by inserting some question and exclamation marks.
This way, the text would be easier to read, and it could be even more entertaining.
Well done!
Wow Raphale,that was a lovely 100 word challenge.I loved they way you made it ryme.Next time, make sure you use a capital letter for each sentance.Apart from that,I loved your 100 word challenge and hope you continue to write such wonderful peices like that.
From Chloe at High Lawn Primary School.
I thought the way you showed your work was really good but on fault you miss out the t
Interesting, thought-provoking and fun.
Bloggers are the social-commentators of our day.
The Dickens’ of the 21st Century,
But with this power and influence
Must come a real sense
Of integrity and responsibility about what they say
How do you think that bloggers should exercise this?
I realy liked the way you spelt the sentence in a line. you werent out of the 100 word challenge by alot you got 101 which is also very good but when you write the sentence down in a line you forgot to add a T.
I thought it was great, good effort.
I really liked that you did a poem. It was really good, and I enjoyed reading it.
It was a little confusing and weird. You are missing the most important part. It wasn’t my fault!!!!
Please can you write more constructive critiscm next time, so that I can learn from it. Thank you.
Great Job. I like your work.
Great effort, you really showed what kids say. Great Job!
Hello Raphael,
this is a truly artistic text, congratulations!
You could add emphasis by inserting some question and exclamation marks.
This way, the text would be easier to read, and it could be even more entertaining.
Well done!
Wow Raphale,that was a lovely 100 word challenge.I loved they way you made it ryme.Next time, make sure you use a capital letter for each sentance.Apart from that,I loved your 100 word challenge and hope you continue to write such wonderful peices like that.
From Chloe at High Lawn Primary School.
Hi rapheal i loved how you put your words in a line and the way you spelt it out like that but you missed out the t for fault