tanka poem

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  1. Raphael says:

    Really good I like how you write the last line in capitals but Tankas are ment to have 5 lines the syliballs going 7 5 7 7 7.

  2. Beatrix says:

    Raphael thank you for reminding us that a tanka poem is meant to have five lines

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