Hi Ben, I loved alian part1 bye the way, and I also love this. Your humerouse personality shined through your work. I loved when you used the word mischiviouse.My only improvement is that maby you could make the story go a bit slower.
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Hi Ben, I loved alian part1 bye the way, and I also love this. Your humerouse personality shined through your work. I loved when you used the word mischiviouse.My only improvement is that maby you could make the story go a bit slower.