Well done Luca, loved the description of a trusty companion and the strong me onf the FMG.
When using punctuation in speechmarks remember that a full stops ends the sentence, you need to just put in commas. I really enjoyed reading it.
I really enjoyed reading your piece of work and there’s a very good cliff hanger at the end. My Dad enjoyed reading this also because he rides a motorbike although he’s not a member of the FMG unfortunately. One improvement though would be you don’t need a comma after a question mark.
Well done Luca, loved the description of a trusty companion and the strong me onf the FMG.
When using punctuation in speechmarks remember that a full stops ends the sentence, you need to just put in commas. I really enjoyed reading it.
Hi Luca,
I really enjoyed reading your piece of work and there’s a very good cliff hanger at the end. My Dad enjoyed reading this also because he rides a motorbike although he’s not a member of the FMG unfortunately. One improvement though would be you don’t need a comma after a question mark.