Hi Liam,
I thought your review of ‘Just William’ was very good. It included why you enjoyed the book and how you could find fault with it as well. However, you did make a few grammatical mistakes.
In a sentence you are always advised to never include more than one ‘and’, instead, you could use commas or put a full stop in its place. You also need to check your work as when you spelt ‘detail’ you spelt it ‘de tale’ and instead of ‘complex’ you wrote ‘comp;ex’. Apart from that, everything was good and remember to carry on blogging, commenting and encouraging the others to do exactly the same. 🙂
Hi Liam,
I thought your review of ‘Just William’ was very good. It included why you enjoyed the book and how you could find fault with it as well. However, you did make a few grammatical mistakes.
In a sentence you are always advised to never include more than one ‘and’, instead, you could use commas or put a full stop in its place. You also need to check your work as when you spelt ‘detail’ you spelt it ‘de tale’ and instead of ‘complex’ you wrote ‘comp;ex’. Apart from that, everything was good and remember to carry on blogging, commenting and encouraging the others to do exactly the same. 🙂
thank you Rafi for that possitive comment