Hi Jamie,
I really enjoyed your review of ‘billionaire boy’ and i completely agree with you about all of it as I have read and enjoyed the book myself. You included some very good adjectives and gave a good summary of the overall story-line. However, I can find a few mistakes:
1. You sometimes overdid the sentences with unnecessary words and description.
2. You spelt the word ‘libraries’ as ‘librariaums’.
Apart from that everything was fine so keep up the great work, comment and encourage the others to do exactly the same.
Hey Jamie I really liked your reveiw.
You put in good vocabulary and good adgectives and got
a very good breif summary on the whole books plot. keep up the good work.
Hi Jamie,
I really enjoyed your review of ‘billionaire boy’ and i completely agree with you about all of it as I have read and enjoyed the book myself. You included some very good adjectives and gave a good summary of the overall story-line. However, I can find a few mistakes:
1. You sometimes overdid the sentences with unnecessary words and description.
2. You spelt the word ‘libraries’ as ‘librariaums’.
Apart from that everything was fine so keep up the great work, comment and encourage the others to do exactly the same.
Hey Jamie I really liked your reveiw.
You put in good vocabulary and good adgectives and got
a very good breif summary on the whole books plot. keep up the good work.
-Harry 😀