Hi Luke, 😀
I think this is a good peice of work because you have described how they were feeling.
Next time you could describe a bit more about the wolf.
I really like your piece of work espicially the part where you say he has a tooth problem!
My one improvment is that some letters need to be capitals and some need to be lower case.
I think the diolog was very good and it told you alot of what was going on.
All I got for you to improve on was the puncuation can you spot them?
Hi Luke, 😀
I think this is a good peice of work because you have described how they were feeling.
Next time you could describe a bit more about the wolf.
I liked your work but it needs better spellings
Hi Luke,
I really like the story of your blog,
I like all the expression,
remember capital letters for the begining of the convasation
Hi Luke,
I really like your piece of work espicially the part where you say he has a tooth problem!
My one improvment is that some letters need to be capitals and some need to be lower case.
Hi Luke,
I really like when you wrote like mice.
One improvment don’t keep on using said.