…all I could see was two red eyes

Posted on November 5, 2012 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to …all I could see was two red eyes

  1. Lauren says:
    November 5, 2012 at 10:15 am

    Lola
    I really like the idea of repeating the words ‘all I could see were 2 read eyes’
    Next time try to put the title with a capital letter and maybe underlined

  2. Alex Carey says:
    November 5, 2012 at 4:37 pm

    I really like the way you said at the end ‘all I could see was millions of red eyes next time underline you title

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