Hi Gabby
Thats one spectacular piece of work I think an author would be proud to put that in his/her book.It was also backed up by great explanation of the setting and what was going on around them. Thank you and well done keep up the good work.
Millaxx
Really nice 100WC this week! Love the ending and how you leave it for questioning. Keep up this is some of your work as it adds more to your writing.
That was amazing. it is much better writing than when i was in year 5
Hi Gabby
Thats one spectacular piece of work I think an author would be proud to put that in his/her book.It was also backed up by great explanation of the setting and what was going on around them. Thank you and well done keep up the good work.
Millaxx