Hello Sam,
I really enjoyed reading your dragon story for the 100 Word Challenge. You described the dragon beautifully and I could really picture it in my head. I thought it was a bit mean for your friends to throw spears at it!
You have clearly thought hard about your sentence openers as you have used a range. It’s worth thinking about starting a sentence with a verb, as it throws the reader into the action.
Keep up the good work, well done.
Hello Sam,
I really enjoyed reading your dragon story for the 100 Word Challenge. You described the dragon beautifully and I could really picture it in my head. I thought it was a bit mean for your friends to throw spears at it!
You have clearly thought hard about your sentence openers as you have used a range. It’s worth thinking about starting a sentence with a verb, as it throws the reader into the action.
Keep up the good work, well done.