Dear Maddie, what a great 100 word challenge, you included everything grandparents do well. I can tell the class in your story were really happy with the task that was set. What would you write down if this was a task your teacher set for you?
Maybe some of your characters could use wow words or adjectives. Well done, carry on writing.
from Anna
at http://www.6d2012.highlawnprimary.net
Dear Maddie, what a great 100 word challenge, you included everything grandparents do well. I can tell the class in your story were really happy with the task that was set. What would you write down if this was a task your teacher set for you?
Maybe some of your characters could use wow words or adjectives. Well done, carry on writing.
from Anna
at
http://www.6d2012.highlawnprimary.net