Well done! Good take on the prompt here Ben- I hope she will enjoy the apples!
Hello Ben, I think this is a really good 100WC, also I think the last sentaence is really true. I like how you have used lots of speech. Maybe next time you could add a little less speech From Annalese http://6d2012.highlawnprimary.net/
Hi Ben I really like your story I think it is funny. Lotte
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Well done! Good take on the prompt here Ben- I hope she will enjoy the apples!
Hello Ben,
I think this is a really good 100WC, also I think the last sentaence is really true. I like how you have used lots of speech. Maybe next time you could add a little less speech
From Annalese
http://6d2012.highlawnprimary.net/
Hi Ben
I really like your story I think it is funny.
Lotte