Good job, Daniel!
Your text presents sound arguments for the importance of grandparents. Congratulations on using formal English to present your case. The only sentence that doesn`t follow this plan is “You following me?”
I am not sure how they can be “a good thing to do”. Do you mean visiting them or rather spending time with them?
Keep up the great work, Daniel!
Kind regards,
Diethild
Well done, Daniel, you have some wonderful ideas about Grandparents! I like the way you used a conclusion to sum up your ideas at the end of your writing, however, it would have been even better if you had used full sentences to do this rather than ‘etc etc’.
Good job, Daniel!
Your text presents sound arguments for the importance of grandparents. Congratulations on using formal English to present your case. The only sentence that doesn`t follow this plan is “You following me?”
I am not sure how they can be “a good thing to do”. Do you mean visiting them or rather spending time with them?
Keep up the great work, Daniel!
Kind regards,
Diethild
Well done, Daniel, you have some wonderful ideas about Grandparents! I like the way you used a conclusion to sum up your ideas at the end of your writing, however, it would have been even better if you had used full sentences to do this rather than ‘etc etc’.
Good work! Keep it up. 🙂
Laura Team 100WC