Hi Armelle
I love work it’s so funny. I really like how you didn’t call Mr Bannana just bannana, it makes is so much funnier. The only problem was that when you wrote IT WASN’T MY FAULT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you forgot speech marks. Apart from that it was great.
your post is very interesting. This definitely is a funny story. I also think this story has a little bit of home to. I enjoy your post and hope to see more of your work in next week’s prompt.
Well done Armelle on this weeks 100WC.,
I found your story very amusing, although I did feel a little sorry for you having to clean up Mr Banana – never mind.
‘At once’ – this is a great sentence opener. Try using a few shorter sentences with more great sentence openers next time.
Keep up the good work.
Hi Armelle
I love work it’s so funny. I really like how you didn’t call Mr Bannana just bannana, it makes is so much funnier. The only problem was that when you wrote IT WASN’T MY FAULT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you forgot speech marks. Apart from that it was great.
Good job Mr. Banana. I think this is a very good little story. I think its really funny and amusing. Can’t wait to read your next 100WC!
Good story
your post is very interesting. This definitely is a funny story. I also think this story has a little bit of home to. I enjoy your post and hope to see more of your work in next week’s prompt.
I really love this story. Sounds like you have a good sense of humor! Good job.
That’s really funny! I like it a lot.
Hi Armelle
Like everyone else, I found this really funny and enjoyable – I can just picture the scenes you’ve described. Well done!
Well done Armelle on this weeks 100WC.,
I found your story very amusing, although I did feel a little sorry for you having to clean up Mr Banana – never mind.
‘At once’ – this is a great sentence opener. Try using a few shorter sentences with more great sentence openers next time.
Keep up the good work.