story of an evacuee

Posted on November 18, 2012 by Deleted User
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3 Responses to story of an evacuee

  1. Milla says:
    November 25, 2012 at 7:18 pm

    Hi Sophie
    GREAT WORK!! Very good description of the mood atmosphere and emotion in the evacuees keep up the good work!
    From Milla xx

  2. Maddie m says:
    December 9, 2012 at 2:48 pm

    hi sophie
    great ajectives and advebs! I love the sentence: I gave her a soul full wave goodbye, and turned away. I could really imagain what it was like to be an evacuee.
    from maddie m

  3. Gabriella says:
    January 3, 2013 at 7:08 pm

    Hi Sophie,
    What a great story! Your story really shows what it would be like to be an
    evacuee!

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