Hi Dilan
I liked your ideas for what you want for Christmas but I think you could have explained why you wanted to have those gifts.Also try to watch out for capital letters spellings and remember you always write I like that.Good job though.
From Milla
Hi Dilan
I liked your ideas for what you want for Christmas but I think you could have explained why you wanted to have those gifts.Also try to watch out for capital letters spellings and remember you always write I like that.Good job though.
From Milla
Hi Dilan
I liked your story veary much but do remember to put a spaces in the midle
of idea and why.
Lotte