last chocolate grabbed 100wc

1 Response to last chocolate grabbed 100wc

1. Milla says:

   November 30, 2012 at 4:41 pm

   Hi Isabella
   I think your description was good but I did not find the story very interesting I think that you could have changed the subject once or twice to make it more entertaining .but good effort and nice work on the adjectives and descriptions
   From Milla

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