10 downing accident 100 wc

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3 Responses to 10 downing accident 100 wc

  1. Jake says:

    Jamie, incredible is practically all I can say about it. One neggative thing though. I’s are spealt with a capital.

  2. Jamie says:

    This is really good I really like the story line but one of the I was not capital.

  3. Niyusha says:

    The peice of writing you wrote was really good and I really enjoyed it. But I found a full stop next to an exclemation mark.

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