The Little Piece of Chocolate

Posted on November 26, 2012 by Deleted User
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1 Response to The Little Piece of Chocolate

  1. Milla says:
    November 30, 2012 at 2:17 pm

    Hi Gabby
    Nice way to grab the readers attention some nice vocabulary and connective I really like the way you described the old woman’s vice and mood when she was telling him not to touch the sugar.Well Done keep up the good work
    Thanks Milla

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