Great work Eve,
the owls sound very mysterious. Try and add some similes when you are describing something like: ‘it was as green as grass’. Remember to use commas, you needed to put one in when you said ‘something fell from the sky, it was an owl.’
Keep up the amazing work,
Rosie.
Great work Eve,
the owls sound very mysterious. Try and add some similes when you are describing something like: ‘it was as green as grass’. Remember to use commas, you needed to put one in when you said ‘something fell from the sky, it was an owl.’
Keep up the amazing work,
Rosie.