Hello Eusebi. Well done for writing your 100 Word Challenge this week. You have left me eager wanting to know what and who this weird creature is. I wonder what it looks like? I liked your use of verbs ‘screamed’ and ‘fled’, it tells me that you were terrified. The last word you used to describe the creature ‘lifeless’ is very powerful, I picture this creature in my head. Well done, I can’t wait to read more of your work!
hi my name is jack. I’m from sa.
I really liked your story. it made me want to read all of it.
great job in 100wc
I really liked it but you could’ve included more action
Hello Eusebi. Well done for writing your 100 Word Challenge this week. You have left me eager wanting to know what and who this weird creature is. I wonder what it looks like? I liked your use of verbs ‘screamed’ and ‘fled’, it tells me that you were terrified. The last word you used to describe the creature ‘lifeless’ is very powerful, I picture this creature in my head. Well done, I can’t wait to read more of your work!