Great story Daniel, it made me chuckle too (I think chuckle is a great, and often underused word)! Great sentence structure and punctuation, and good use of speech. You show good imagination and a good sense of humour too, I really enjoyed your short story. Well done!
Great story Daniel, it made me chuckle too (I think chuckle is a great, and often underused word)! Great sentence structure and punctuation, and good use of speech. You show good imagination and a good sense of humour too, I really enjoyed your short story. Well done!