I really like your work Mia it really draws you in. The only thing wrong is that you didn’t leave a space after a full stop. Apart from that it was really good. Well done
Very well done Mia! This is a very thoughtful , haunting , wonderful and mature piece of writing! I think you have a great writing career ahead of you!
Wow, Mia that is an amazing piece of writing! Well done.
I really like your work Mia it really draws you in. The only thing wrong is that you didn’t leave a space after a full stop. Apart from that it was really good. Well done
Very well done Mia! This is a very thoughtful , haunting , wonderful and mature piece of writing! I think you have a great writing career ahead of you!