upside down or right side up

Posted on December 2, 2012 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to upside down or right side up

  1. hector says:
    December 4, 2012 at 10:12 am

    Hi Nathalie , I like your ”Out of tune music played in my body , ”. You can improve by putting speech marks in .

  2. Alexander says:
    December 9, 2012 at 7:59 pm

    Hi Nathalie,
    great poem could use a full stop at the end instead of a comma
    Alexander

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